She
woke the next morning in her apartment
feeling parched. She’d combed her hair last night after a ritual cleansing shower
and confined it in a tail, thinking blearily about dying it. It had been a rich,
glossy blue-green, but this morning it was dry and brittle like dried kelp. Her
skin itched, and lotion didn’t help. An entire pot of coffee and glasses of
water barely quenched her thirst.
She didn’t understand how she could
be dehydrated, but maybe the dip in the sea had done more harm than she realized.
As soon as she thought about it, she craved salt water.
Groaning, she sank into a chair at
her table and ran a hand over her dry hair. All morning she’d yearned for
something, a craving she didn’t want to acknowledge. Those witches, or whatever
they were, had done more than drown her. They’d changed her somehow, and now
she longed for the sea like an addict craved gin. She wanted to swill it, swim
in it, and it hurt.
She paced. Her skin felt too tight,
and her bones ached. The last thing she wanted was to go back to the scene of
her attempted murder. She had some Epsom salts; maybe that would be enough.
Seizing on the idea, she hurried to the bathroom and dumped half a bag in the
bathwater.
It helped. It didn't feel quite
right, the balance of salt and water seemed to be lacking something, some kind
of mineral perhaps. Closing her eyes, she tried to think what to do. She didn't
dare go to the doctor and be treated like a freak. Same with the police; they
would think she was on crack. She wasn't possessed, so priest was out, and as
far as she knew the X-Men were fictional. Maybe there were mermaids after all,
but it's not like they were the Yellow Pages. She felt her body settled heavily
on the bottom of the tub and opened her eyes with a frown. They widened as she
realized her body had absorbed all the salt water, leaving a bone dry tub. With
that much water in her system her skin should have looked plump, you bloated,
but it was only slightly less withered then when she got in.
She frantically turned on the tap and added the
rest of the salt to the water, but she knew in her heart it wouldn’t be enough.
She was going to have to return to the sea.
A couple typos but nothing your editing won't fix. I am enjoying the read so far. Can't wait 'til it comes out this Spring. :)
ReplyDeleteNot to worry; it's a rough draft.
ReplyDeleteCara an Tremor are they in another book? im such a fan just got the fire book,,,
ReplyDeleteScorched Earth is Tremor and Cara's story.
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