No matter how many times I (or my editor) look over a manuscript, things slip through. It's super frustrating, but readers can help! It takes time away from other work to pull up a manuscript and fix stuff, but it's nice to know that I've done the best I can to weed mistakes out.
Find a typo on a new release? Let me know! Just got this one today:
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Hi, I noticed some potential corrections for Autumn Dawn on Kindle. If you have already made them please ignore. After the attack in the dragon mountains Kjertil agrees to challenge Indris not Chaldric. Ria's death throes has the word bugling instead of bulging to describe her eyes. Love the seriese. Please keep up the good work. Best wishes S.
Another one:
The
part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday
changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just
turned 20 on page 42.
I've enjoyed all the other three books in this 4-book elemental world and have waited anxiously for Cara's story to be written. Autumn Dawn's creation of a world of Elementals is wonderful and spikes the imagination.I've enjoyed all the other three books in this 4-book elemental world and have waited anxiously for Cara's story to be written. Autumn Dawn's creation of a world of Elementals is wonderful and spikes the imagination.The
part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday
changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just
turned 20 on page 42.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
I've enjoyed all the other three books in this 4-book elemental world and have waited anxiously for Cara's story to be written. Autumn Dawn's creation of a world of Elementals is wonderful and spikes the imagination.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
I've enjoyed all the other three books in this 4-book elemental world and have waited anxiously for Cara's story to be written. Autumn Dawn's creation of a world of Elementals is wonderful and spikes the imagination.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
However, I feel as if there were several chapters left out of this book, as it was such a quick ending and there were a couple grammar errors in the beginning of the story which might have been just the formatting of the book to sell? The part that caught my attention was the glitch on Cara's birthday changing from turning 22 in the beginning, to stating she had just turned 20 on page 42. The 22 was a little young in my mind for being involved with such an older elemental, but still worked and flowed for me, it was the turning 20 years old, that had me cringe just a little, as she was just nineteen the day before, and it seemed young for me.
Overall, a good book to read, but the other 3 were more detailed and longer. I recommend reading all four of her books.
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